Friday, September 26, 2014

Maths: Practice 3-2 Patterns for Facts; enrichment 3-2 Patterns, Patterns Everywhere
Social Studies: Review Chapter 1 pp.12-36 Test Monday)
Click here for Quizlet: Chapter 1 Complete Vocabulary
Spelling: Review List 4
Reading & Writing Workshop: Final Copy - Personal Narrative:
Is your Personal Narrative the best it can be? Check the rubric below. All final copies due Monday morning.


Writing Rubric

Grade 4, Personal Narrative

Directions: Reread your narrative. What do you need to do to make it better? Use this rubric to help you decide. Check the sentences that describe your narrative.

Rings the Bell!

  • check boxThe story starts with a question, a surprising statement, or dialogue.
  • check boxDetails and dialogue tell what I saw, heard, tasted, smelled, and felt.
  • check boxAll the events are important and in order.
  • check boxI can hear my voice. My writing sounds like me.
  • check boxThe ending tells how the story worked out or what I thought or felt.
  • check boxThere are almost no mistakes in capitalization, punctuation, or spelling.

Getting Stronger

  • check boxThe beginning could be more interesting.
  • check boxMore details are needed to describe what happened more clearly.
  • check boxSome sentences aren't important to the story.
  • check boxIn some places, my writing doesn't sound like me.
  • check boxThe ending needs more elaboration.
  • check boxThere are a few mistakes.

Try Harder

  • check boxThe beginning is boring.
  • check boxWhere are the details? It's hard to picture what happened.
  • check boxMost events are unimportant or out of order.
  • check boxMy writing doesn't sound like me at all!
  • check boxThe story just stops. How does it work out? What did I think or feel?
  • check boxThere are a lot of mistakes.

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